There once was a house
on top of a hill
Where a very bad monster
used to live
Now it is empty
Oh yes, I am sure
So lead the way
To the top of the hill
And we will go in
Close our eyes
and count to three
It might eat you
It wonβt get me
You see my friend
This is your end
You shouldn’t have
trusted me
I would never count
as far as three
– HTJ
The pictures have been edited, but they are from http://www.morguefile.com, the first photo is by AcrylicArtist and the last photo is byΒ utoplec.
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Thank you π
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You’re welcome what may I call you?
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My name is Hilde Therese, but when it comes to music I only use Therese π
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Very well Therese it isπ…A big hi from Ushnish
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Hi, thanks for stopping by!
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You’re welcome Thereseπππ·π·
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Nice n super creepy
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Thank you, that was the atmosphere I was aiming for π
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Lovely poem!
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Thank you π
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Beautiful
love it
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Thank you π
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Really good and really dark!
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Thank you, really glad you liked it! π
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Beautiful piece. Cheers…
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Thank you so much π
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Thank you π
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Cool! Fun and quirky.
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Thank you π Glad you liked it!
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π€ loved
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Thank you so much π
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I LOVE IT!!!!
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Thank you! π
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I like your sinister streak… Touches a cord inside me tooπ
I like you Hilde…
N I’m coming for you
Hide if you want to
Just be sure to stay warm
Won’t like you to be chilled.πΉ
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Yeah…a bit creepy…
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This is very well written!
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Thank you πΈ
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Thank you π Sure, I’ll check it out
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Why did you lead me here,
To this house on the hill,
I am roped, bound and eyes filled with tears,
I never wanted to come it must of been when you slipped my drink that pill.
You tell me to trust you and count to three,
But all I want to do is go home and let out a shrill,
Pain and darkness fills within me,
Till this day no one knows what happened in that house on the hill.
Great poem. Creepy and was ominous. I could also hear sharp violin chords being played.
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Interesting π To be honest I think of it more playful, maybe the friend isn’t so innocent either and I might write another to show how the story goes π Thanks for the response and the poem π
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A sequel π now that’s the good stuff.
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I like the openness to interpretation of the poem and the dark tone.!i recently wrote a poem that you might like. Itβs my most recent post!
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Thank you π I’ll check it out
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It gave me goosebumps, I love it! β₯
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Thank you π Glad you liked it!
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Thank you for stopping by and your encouraging comment, look forward to hitting on the follow button and catching up with your posts. Chris
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This is beautifully noir! I find it even more fascinating because poetry is the one thing I could never do. Cheers!
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Thank you! π Really glad you liked it π
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