I love you
She said
In the brightest colors
Hush, she whispered
In the sweetest pink
If you’re blue
Don’t worry
I got you
Or green
Remember I’m yours
Be yellow
With me
Just like the sun
But let your heart beat
In the darkest red
For me
Just like my heart
Beats for you
-HTJ
If you like the images that have been used to illustrate this poem, they are all from morguefile.com. The photos have been edited, but the first photo is by and the greyerbaby the second photo is by davidpwhelan.
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Great writing 👍🏻
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Thank you! 🙂 Always fun to try to write something different, my first love poem on the blog 🙂
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Keep going. I write poetry occasionally as well but I’m a bit shy about publishing it.
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You should just publish, people are normally pretty kind around here so I wouldn’t be too afraid 😉 always fun to try something new 🙂
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beautiful and colorful poem, like love. you write with great sensitivity.
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Thank you 😀 was fun to write something different 😊
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Awesome post 😍
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Thank you! 😀
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Different today No music!!!
But yes showing colors of love with different flavors… I loved this poem so much the way you presented 🤗
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Thank you 😊 Really glad you liked it, no music for the poems, just for the stories, but it could have been a sweet song 😀
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> > MyStoriesWithMusic posted: “I love you She said In the brightest colors > Hush, she whispered In the sweetest pink If you’re blue Don’t worry I > got you Or green Remember I’m yours Be yellow With me Just like the sun > But let your heart beat In the darkest red For ” >
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Makes you feel very warm and fuzzy! Lovely piece.
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Thank you! 😀
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Oh, how beautiful. ❤
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Thank you! 😀 Glad you think so 😊
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Do you see us soon meet *** Or I will spend the age of grief and wailing *** I felt the deprivation of distractions Concerns *** Shed the sorrows in a terrible silence *** Ask the days, cute or fantasy *** or echo Yansab in my ears Habib *** Publish Al-Farah in Derby Abtajh *** Send hopes in my heart dreary *** Yahbibi has been warmed live alone *** And Ihaki between Annati and Suhadi *** And waiting for you to be patiently patience *** No longer whitewash my longing بتاريخ ٢٧/٠٥/٢٠١٨ ٢:٣٧ م، كتب “MyStoriesWithMusic” :
> MyStoriesWithMusic posted: “I love you She said In the brightest colors > Hush, she whispered In the sweetest pink If you’re blue Don’t worry I > got you Or green Remember I’m yours Be yellow With me Just like the sun > But let your heart beat In the darkest red For ” >
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Hey, this is different from your usual stuff, but brimming with creativity, as always!
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Thank you, glad you think so! 😀 It is very different, I guess the beautiful summer weather got to me 😉
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Ah. Lucky you. Around here, we call it the hot, ever-prevalent summer weather and all it does is give me writer’s block.
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I probably wouldn’t do so well in that kind of heat either, more used to the cold 🙂
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Well, it appears a little bit of heat is an awesome stimulant for our creativity, though. 🙂
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A little bit of heat, but also that everything has become so green and beautiful, flowers are blooming everywhere as well 😊 In cold countries like mine when spring/summer comes all the people living there tend to become really happy, acting like they all fell in love at the same time 🙂🌻🌿🌞
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Yes, I’ve noticed that in foreigners (to my country) a lot. They seem to love our summers. We would give anything for their winters. 😉
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Haha 😊 (I guess everyone always want what they can’t get 😉)
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LOVED this!! Thank you! 🌸🌸🌸
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Thank you so much! 😀🌻
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You are so welcome. 🌹
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Such a rainbow. Remind me of this:
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Great, I’ll check it out 🙂
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Really like it!
I’ve nominated you for a Sunshine Blogger Award, guess your blog ‘lights up’ my day! https://wp.me/p7MXFt-Ui
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Thank you! 😀 That is really kind of you 😊 but I try to keep my posts about stories and music, at least for now 🙂
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That’s cool. Just my way of saying, love the blog! 🙂
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I appreciate it 😊
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This is amazing! Love your creative usage of colors to paint the picture ❤
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Thank you 😊 it was a lot of fun to write!
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I am sure it was! 🙂
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