Fallen Star



I refuse to write any more poems

She said

This will be my last one

And it won’t be about those glowing stars

She shouted

This one

It will be about how they fall down

All dark

Covered in nothing

All alone I’m sure

Yes, this poem will be about that

She whispered



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If you like the images that have been used to illustrate this poem they are from morguefile.com. All the photos have been edited, but the first photo is by lisaleo, the second photo is by cheetahonweb and the third photo is by lauramusikanski.

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    1. MyStoriesWithMusic

      No worries I will 🙂 Not an autobiographical poem. Don’t consider myself a poetry star either so there can be no falling 😉

  1. Liv Miles

    Lovely poem! I love the reluctance of the narrator. It’s like the poem is spilling out of her, regardless of what she actually wants. The muse does what the muse wants 🙂

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