Don’t forget
to breathe
She said
I tried
I really did
But the air
really couldn’t
reach me

Breathe
She would whisper
Just breathe
For another minute
For another second
Until we get out
Have faith
She would mumble
I don’t know
If it was meant for me
Or for herself

Just one
more breathe
I need you
to do that
for me
I could barely hear her
Couldn’t see her
But I did breathe
Had to do it
Couldn’t let her down
-HTJ

This poem reminds me of another poem I wrote; There is no time for crying: https://mystorieswithmusic.com/2019/02/20/there-is-no-time-for-crying/, I feel like this poem is about the same sisters on their journey in a dangerous world. Maybe this would be a good poem to have in the next poetry night post that I plan, where there will be more audio poems. What do you guys think?

If you like the images that have been used to illustrate this poem, they are all from morguefile.com. All the photos have been edited, but the first photo is by chucku2, the second photo is by DeduloPhotos, the third photo is by meneya, the fourth photo is by RebeccaMatthews and the last photo is by diannehope.
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Thank you I think 🙂
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A lovely poem with a desire for calmness. I like the way you have approached this 🙂 🙂
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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Nice
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Beautiful. Yes, more audio poems too!
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Wow! It’s amazing
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Thank you so much! 😀
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I’d like to hear you read both poems one after the other
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I do feel they are from the same story at least 🙂
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An epic poem in the making 😊
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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it’s a wonderful, mesmerizing poem artfully intermingled with images; a pleasure to read
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Thank you so much, glad you think so 😊
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Simple, yet sends such a powerful message! 🙂
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Thank you, glad you like it! 😊
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Lovely poem… 😊
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Goes well with your pictures!
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Thank you! 🙂
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You’re welcome again lol!
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Beautiful poem!
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Thank you, glad you think so 🙂 I will post the audio version of it today 😊
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Yes I do ! Oh good look forward to listening to it.☺
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