Donโ€™t forget 
to breathe
She said
I tried
I really did
But the air
really couldnโ€™t
reach me
She would whisper
Just breathe
For another minute
For another second
Until we get out
Have faith
She would mumble
I donโ€™t know
If it was meant for me
Or for herself
 Just one 
more breathe
I need you
to do that
for me
I could barely hear her
Couldnโ€™t see her
But I did breathe
Had to do it
Couldnโ€™t let her down

This poem reminds me of another poem I wrote; There is no time for crying:, I feel like this poem is about the same sisters on their journey in a dangerous world. Maybe this would be a good poem to have in the next poetry night post that I plan, where there will be more audio poems. What do you guys think?

This is now apparently my โ€œpoetry night owlโ€ ๐Ÿ˜Š

If you like the images that have been used to illustrate this poem, they are all from All the photos have been edited, but the first photo is by chucku2, the second photo is by DeduloPhotos, the third photo is by meneya, the fourth photo is by RebeccaMatthews and the last photo is by diannehope.

ยฉ Hilde Therese Juvodden, MyStoriesWithMusic, 2019. Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this siteโ€™s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Hilde T. Juvodden and MyStoriesWithMusic with appropriate and specific direction to the original content. โ€“ Simply donโ€™t steal my stuff ๐Ÿ˜Š

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